After school I took my friend Kate to my house for a playdate. When we got there we ate a snack .After we went on the trampoline. Then Kate mom and her brother came. Then we jump on the trampoline again. After we played on the trampoline we played with chalk. Then it was time for Kate to go home. I had a fun playdate.
Good reporting, Claire. Concise and well written. Glad you had fun!
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Very good, Claire, but you made a couple of grammatical errors. I’m sure you’ll spot these in the future as you get more used to writing like this.